如何写好英语求职信细节

2018-11-25

四、关于求职信的结尾用语,下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。a:(1)软弱、羞涩的:ifyouthinkicanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,ishallbegladtotalkwithyou.(2)改写后(较佳):ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson.b:(1)怀疑,不妥、不安全的:ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asi'msureaninterviewwillconvinceyoui'mthemanforthejob.

(2)改写后:iwouldliketorequestaninterview.youcanreachmebytelephoneatbeijing123456betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening. 

c:(1)请求式的句子,不够完整(遗漏面谈时间):iwouldappreciatetheopportunityforaninterview.icanbereachedbycallingbeijing12345678.(2)改写后:mayihavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurtherwithyou?mytelephonenumberisbeijing12345678.youcanreachmebetweennineandfiveo'clockduringtheday.